Saturday, October 31, 2009

A Brief History of Lenayin


Regular readers of fantasy may notice that the land of Lenayin is a little more complicated than many fantasy lands. This is because the real world is complicated, and I think a lot of fantasy novels don’t make much effort to do this justice. This is the age of monocultures. In the past, in most nations, things were more fractured.

Lenayin has eleven provinces, divided mostly along linguistic lines. It’s a rugged place, entirely mountainous but not like the Alps, with its neat divides between ranges and valleys. It’s probably more like Afghanistan, though with a kinder climate -- some areas are just very inaccessible, and it makes traveling around difficult. As a result, regional differences have become quite large, though the people all retain enough similarities to identify themselves as Lenay.

There’s some geographical inspiration for that -- Papua New Guinea for example, has hundreds of valleys and hundreds of languages, remote tribes in the jungle who have been isolated from each other for so long even though they’re quite close together, that their languages have split in all kinds of directions. Lenayin’s also had quite a few invasions over the centuries, new groups moving in, making lots of diversity.

Structurally, my ideas for Lenayin’s demographics were probably most inspired by India. The people themselves are nothing like Indians, of course, but the idea of a land divided between many language groups, a lot of whom don’t even speak the so-called primary tongue, appealed to me. Also like India, Lenayin is a nation of animist and ‘pagan’ beliefs whose ruling classes were dominated by a foreign religion. Of course, the Verenthanes would be considered by Muslims ‘pagans’ too, as they’re polytheists, but they’re both very structured and disciplined religions, well suited for the purposes of ruling classes.

But like I said, as a people, Lenays are completely different from Indians. Indians have always tended to be basically peaceful and hierarchical -- India has tended toward a worldview that some people are placed above other people, who are placed above other people, and so on up the line. That plus the sheer fertility of the land makes for a stable and long lasting civilisation. But Lenays are militant individualists, inspired I think by some mix of American or Australian liberalism. Or maybe the Scots, certainly William Wallace would have been right at home in Lenayin. Probably the militant bit comes from their origins from before any of them can remember, of invading hordes who won these lands by force. But also, the fertile lands in Lenayin are limited, resources sometimes scarce, and regions got into the habit of fighting to get what they needed.

Some might claim they’ve taken it a bit too far, with the result that Lenayin is basically a warrior society. Most of the population live in small towns as the landscape doesn’t really lend itself to big cities, and small towns don’t lend themselves easily to hierarchical society, there just isn’t the scale of population. Also, Lenays are individualists because it can be a rough place to live, and people need to be tough and resourceful (think Alaska, with similar landscape, though not quite so cold in winter). Combined with frequent fighting and in their earlier years no real central governance, this can lead to anarchy real fast, and in various periods of their history has done so.

So to stop the place falling apart completely, there are codes. Societies with very little functioning governance need codes of behaviour, especially when everyone is armed and potentially violent. And so Lenayin has evolved over many hundreds of years an honour code of warriors. They worship violence, but only in certain forms. Honourable killings, where two opponents or two sides are equally matched, are respected. Dishonourable killings, where one person or side never had a realistic chance of victory, are not. Of course, if a weaker person insults a stronger person, the stronger person is not bound to limitless patience, so weaker people learn to tread carefully, and strong people tend to swagger, as in all societies. People who violate the code are dealt with harshly.

This puts the brakes on the violence and makes a lot of Lenays (though by no means all) quite decent and respectable even by real world standards -- these basic tenets of morality are central to every Lenay’s life, especially the men (and all men are warriors, at least in theory). Insulting a Lenay is very risky business, but on the other hand a Lenay will run into a burning building to save a total stranger. No Lenay man can live with being called a coward, and they love the idea of heroism so much, they’d probably be fighting each other to be first in the door. Kind of like the ancient Greeks, I suppose.

Of course, these are the ideals of the code. In reality, children are killed in wars, men are murdered in cold blood, and the victors turn a blind eye and pretend not to notice. Some Lenays are cowards (and live in terror of discovery), and surely some cheat, steal and rape too. But not many, and not often, because these ideals are powerful, and are perhaps the single most important unifying concept that binds all the disparate people of the nation together, and makes them identify themselves as Lenays -- more important than ethnicity (which is all over the place), and language (ditto) or even religion (which is split in two, if you can even consider the Goeren-yai paganism a ‘religion’). They are a people bound together by common ideas... which I’ve always contended are far stronger than any of those other possible bonds. However, it is important to recall, much of that binding is done with blood, mostly each others’, and its constant spilling.

All of this also makes for an interesting dynamic with my main character, Sasha, in that she is a woman in a very patriarchal society, who comes to be respected as a warrior. It works in Lenayin where it would not in many other patriarchal societies, because of the Lenay value structure. Firstly, they value warriors, and skill at war. Sasha is trained by the best, Kessligh Cronenverdt, a legend in Lenayin and rightly known as the greatest swordman in the land. Now for a Lenay, that’s no guarantee of respect -- people have to earn their own respect, not just have it conferred upon them by a relationship with others, and they have bad names for people who assume a sense of entitlement by family, marriage or the like. But with Kessligh, they figure correctly that he wouldn’t waste his time if she weren’t good, and enough people have actually seen her fight that they can confirm it.

Kessligh’s skills are Nasi-Keth, which is a foreign importation from the serrin peoples of Saalshen, but Lenays don’t mind that either because foreign things don’t scare them (Lenayin is so diverse that everything seems foreign), and it’s hard to argue with results in something like sword fighting. The fact that Sasha is former royalty is cause for as much suspicion as anything else, but Lenays have great affection for crazy individualists, and it’s pretty obvious that a Lenay princess would have to be completely crazy to give up that life to become a Nasi-Keth trainee in the wilds, so she gains big bonus points right there. In most such patriarchal societies, people would just say she’s crazy, and condemn her. In Lenayin they agree that she’s crazy, but love her for it. That’s what makes Lenayin different.

This brings us to the last and perhaps most significant point about Lenayin -- unlike so many peoples in so many fantasy novels, Lenays couldn’t give a pile of horse manure about nobility, rank, status, or any of the sort. Lenays achieve status amongst their peers by being upstanding individuals. Which for Lenays, means that you have to be a respected warrior, but you also have to be a ‘good guy’, the kind of person people don’t mind taking advice from. Never ‘orders’, though. Lenays don’t do ‘orders’, except in crisies or wars, where village headmen and respected elders may be empowered to give them. But even there, any Lenay man who feels his personal honour violated by an order, is under no obligation to follow them.

Leading people of Lenayin, as the new class of rulers has discovered, is no easy thing. In fact, it can be rather like herding cats -- again, Afghanistan comes to mind. But then, a lot of lands possess a diversity of viewpoints, and a dislike of central authority, that has made them difficult to govern. The French, the British and the Americans to name just three.

I was interested as I wrote ‘Sasha’ that there weren’t many fantasy novels I could think of featuring a people who embraced what we political science types would call liberalism, roughly meaning the preeminence of the individual in society. I guess a lot of that is because there wasn’t all that much liberalism in the ancient societies that seem to inspire most fantasy novels. But there have been some -- Athens most notably, though with limits. The Romans too, amongst whom liberalism always existed as an idea, just never particularly well practised.

In ‘The Lord of the Rings’, Rohan and Gondor were fighting for freedom, yet lived within fairly rigid hierarchies and derived all honour from service to their respective kings or leaders. Better that, obviously, than Sauron. But if the King of Rhohan had ruled Lenayin instead, and Lenayin had been located next to Mordor, and the King was telling his people not to worry about all these armies of orcs pouring forth, the Lenays would have told him to shove it and gone off to war without him.

I can’t think of many fantasy novels where the people live beneath the rule of a king, but are ambivalent toward him and his authority. Because fantasy novels tend to be in love with the power of kings, and in love with the feudal system that sustains it... and sure, there is a lot of romance surrounding a position of such extreme authority. But the reality of such systems, of course, is that much of what we perceive as romance from that period of European history (picture glamorous king in crimson cloak on prancing white steed), was in fact propaganda by those kings who wanted to make themselves look good, and semi-divine, for obvious reasons.

Though power itself can be glamorous, much of the romance surrounding that power was in reality bullshit, and much of the manner in which kings actually ruled was cruel, arbitrary and unenlightened, to put it mildly. A good king could certainly be better than a bad king, but the system itself doesn’t allow much of what we would consider today ‘liberal open mindedness’ -- you’re either loyal, or you’re dead, and that applies to those living beneath good kings and bad kings alike. George RR Martin is one fantasy author who grasps this extremely well in ‘A Song of Ice and Fire’. But a lot of fantasy, sadly I think, tends to swallow the propaganda whole, because the propaganda is pretty. Perhaps this just goes to illustrate that there is a statue of limitations on the offense caused by nasty political systems. Fantasy writers glorifying Nazism would get into trouble. Feudalism, not so much.

And yes, I am just stirring.

I wanted the land of my primary characters to be unique in this way, in that they regard authority with suspicion, and will only accept leadership from people whose merits have been proven -- and even then, that leader has to tread lightly. If a king wants a war in Lenayin, he just needs to raise taxes. Though mind you, that’s been true in most lands through much of human history.

Whether this would make Lenayin a better place to live in than a traditional feudal European society, is a matter individuals can debate. On the one hand, in Lenayin you’d be relatively free. You could say what you wanted, and insult whom you chose, so long as you were prepared to fight to the death if they were sufficiently offended by it. (Most Lenays actually prefer to be polite, most of the time). You could work your own land, control your own business, and improve your own life however you chose. If you’re a woman, Lenayin would certainly be FAR better, because you’d have a lot of the freedoms without any of the violence (unless you were Isfayen, but that’s another story). It’s patriarchal, but not oppressively so, and Lenay men tell all the familiar jokes about how their women boss them around at home.

On the other hand, you could be a feudal peasant, working hard labour on land you don’t own, donating most of your crop to your local lord, and scraping by on whatever’s left. Periodically you’d be recruited into an army, have something big and sharp shoved into your hands and be told to kill people with it, for reasons that your lord deems suitable. If you protest... well, better that you don’t. On the upside, wars don’t come all that often, and most peasants (and most people in such lands ARE peasants) die in bed. At the age of about forty.

You can see which I’d prefer. But for Lenayin, the price of freedom is elevated levels of violence. So does that mean that Lenayin’s state of affairs is in some ways an argument for America’s Second Amendment and NRA membership? I’m slightly astonished at that myself, but I can’t deny the possibility. On the other hand, we’re in a more evolved age today, and comparisons with pre-technological ages can be very misleading. What do you think?

18 Comments:

Blogger shifto said...

I didn't really read anything American in your book at all, least of all a promotion of the right to bear arms. However, now that it's been mentioned I can see it.

I read this post expecting to see one particular region mentioned, The Balkans. I've spent time there and after reading this book it was really all I could think about. The 2 dominant religions, the perceived difference in "race" (even though they're all probably ethnically the same), then there's those "other folk." Maybe the serrin are a poor allegory for the roma, but it worked in my head.

I suppose that's what's great about fiction. I was able to see the commentary on real life you were making and applying it to something that I've seen or studied myself.

Great story. I can't wait for the rest of the series to be published here in the States.

2:01 AM  
Blogger Joel Shepherd said...

Hi Shifto

You're right, it can be read in any number of ways, and it's not meant to be directly allegorical of any of them. It's certainly not my intention to promote the right to bear arms in America, nor to deny that right, merely to play with the ideas that surround and inspire it. Though I admit I obviously have affection for Lenays, and if they lived in America they'd all be NRA members for sure.

I admit I hadn't thought too much about the Balkans because the Balkan conflict is so much about religion, and Lenayin's internal conflicts really aren't. The northerners want to make it about religion, but the thing that really pisses off the Goeren-yai in the end is nobility and feudalism, neither of which is native to Lenayin, nor respected there.

I'm also waiting for someone to draw the obvious allegory between the serrin and the Jews... which I won't deny as partial inspiration, but again, many differences.

3:00 AM  
Blogger Alec said...

Ah, the original post is much more enlightening than your blurb on the Pyr blog!

Just going to add that if you are into philosophy at all you should check out Hannah Arendt in The Human Condition. She starts out with the Greeks using an awesome (for lack of a better word) framework to explain the position of the individual in the social, private, and public spheres of life -- and goes on to show how that position has changed throughout different civilization up until democratic capitalism. I only mention her because you seem to keep coming back to Greek individualism quite a bit and she puts it nicely in perspective.

2:34 AM  
OpenID sraets said...

This is fascinating. I recently reviewed Sasha for fantasyliterature.com --- this article explains many of the aspects of the novel I admired the most (especially the world-building). I'm very excited to read Petrodor when it's released here in the US.

5:50 AM  
Blogger Joel Shepherd said...

Thanks sraets, Petrodor should be out in March.

3:33 PM  
Anonymous Scott Taylor said...

I don't know where it comes from but there's a saying that's bandied about by Americans in favour of the concealed carry statutes that exist in over 40 US states. The saying goes, "An armed society is a polite society". And Joel it sounds like you've captured that essence in these books.

Look at our own society in recent times. You can get glassed in a pub without provocation or bashed by a gang at the train station. And you've got nothing for your defence except calling the cops, who will arrive in time to mop up the blood or bag your body. There's another saying which aptly describes this, "When seconds count the police are only minutes away".

I haven't read the new books (I told you before they came out fantasy wasn't my thing), but I see I'm going to have to get them now. But it's interesting to see that you noticed the similarities between what you have come up with in this series and the US 2nd Amendment. As a legal & licenced firearms owner in Australia it's a subject that has some interest to me.


Now in the last 15 years or so we've been brainwashed by the media in Australia with this whole "guns are bad" mantra, and it's easy to point to the recent shooting in Texas as evidence of this. Except when you notice where this lastest shooting, and in fact the majority of shootings in the US occur.
They're called "Gun Free zones"! Yep, Americans designate these areas where no one is allowed to carry guns for their defence and without fail these are the areas where people are gunned down. Because the shooter knows his targets are unarmed.

Before anyone points out that this lastest shooting was on an army base, army bases both here and in the US are pretty much "Gun Free zones". Just recently the Australian news channels proved that our bases here in Australia are protected by unarmed private security. All the hardware is locked up unless they're on the way to the range and even then, ammo doesn't meet gun until they are on the range.

Okay so as Joel said, the price for an armed society might be a slightly higher level of violence. But those getting killed or injured are those who think it's cool to attack or rob people indescriminately. The other option is to leave your personal defence up to the people running the show. Your elected government. You know, the same people taking care of our hospital, roads and schools. God help us all.

Nice to see you back and updating again Joel.

8:09 PM  
Blogger Joel Shepherd said...

Hey Scott

It's a debate I don't really want to get into here because the last thing I want to do to any readers is come across like I'm preaching from any position. I just like to play with these ideas, and readers from all spectrums will hopefully get something out of it.

I will say that firearm crimes in America are way higher per capita than Australia, and it's pretty clear to me that the easy availability of firearms has something to do with it. On the other hand I think Americans have much firmer ideas on political freedom than Australians do, and to the extent that the 2nd Amendment was created to protect those freedoms, I respect that too.

Is that a good tradeoff? Well that's the kind of question that interests me. Which is why I don't like preaching on any of these things, I'm far more interested in the questions than in any definitive answer, because the honest answers are usually both yes and no.

2:54 AM  
Anonymous Scott Taylor said...

But are guns the problem? Or is it just a cultural thing?

If you look at the USA, the area's with the highest crime (New York, Washington DC, Los Angeles, Chicago) generally have stricter gun laws than Australia. The media love to mention America's high gun death rate without mentioning over half of their yearly gun deaths are due to suicide (56% on average). But can you blame the easy access to guns for the high suicide rate? In Japan and China they have an insanely high amount of suicides, yet private gun ownership in those countries is essentially banned.

Then you've got places like Switzerland where every able bodied male is handed an assault rifle and ammunition to take home. Yet, they don't go shooting up churches and schools. Or look to New Zealand, our cultural cousins. We spent over a billion dollars on several gun buybacks and restrictive gun laws, while in NZ all the guns we banned are legal. Yet we have much higher gun crime than they do.

I think it's easy for people to blame guns, rather than the culture they live in. It is an interesting question and one without easy answers.

But I look at it this way. Where would I prefer to live?
The UK, which is headed towards realising Orwell's nightmare of "1984". Or America, where you still have some rights, but probably has a few too many guns in the wrong hands and far too many lawyers.

Which way will Australia head? it's going to be an interesting ride.

12:16 PM  
Blogger Joel Shepherd said...

All interesting stuff for sure. I agree that availability of guns is only one factor, and by no means THE factor. And I think Australia's teen suicide rate is up there pretty close to Japan's, so we're in no position to lecture anyone about unnecessary deaths. Bullying in schools in this nation should be declared a crisis, it's a national disgrace.

6:44 PM  
Anonymous Suhyun said...

hi, just read Sasha, Petrodor and Tracato they were great. Did nothing for the last three days though.
i'm not actually commenting on the post but i didnt know where else to leave a comment lol.
But the world you made was amazing, all the religious conflict and problems were realistic and your style of writing really brought your characters to life. I could clearly picture the battles and wars they fought.
I can't wait to read Haven, when does it come out in Australia?

11:32 PM  
Blogger Joel Shepherd said...

Hi Suhyun, glad you're enjoying them. Haven should be out about September in Australia, I think. Which is about the same time Tracato will be out in America, then Haven in about March 2011.

3:16 PM  
Anonymous Scott Taylor said...

Just thought I'd let you know I finally relented and bought Sasha to see what it was like. Funny enough I loved it.

Now I'm reading Petrodor. It's great stuff. As I've mentioned before, it's not really my scene but I'm glad I've taken the plunge.

Keep them coming.

7:18 PM  
Blogger Joel Shepherd said...

Hey Scott

Glad you like it. I think people who don't want to read either my SF or my fantasy because they don't usually read one or the other may be surprised. I don't follow the conventions particularly in any genre, I just write what appeals to me. And I've had lots of feedback from readers who rarely if ever read either genre, but somehow got onto one of them (often by a recommendation) and were very surprised at how much they liked it.

11:03 PM  
Anonymous Emma said...

hey. just wanted to let you know that i loved sasha and petrodor and am currently waiting for tracato to be posted here because i can't find it in any bookstore, i ahould have it in a couple of days and the way i'm going it'll be read in a few days after that.
i loved the way the characters in sasha and petrodor interacted and how the differences played out. i love sasha, i love finding a female heroine who can take charge and fight for what she wants. the intracacies in the lenay society and land are strong and the writing amazing. i was drawn in entirely. love your books, can't wait to read more

12:17 PM  
Blogger anke said...

Joel - I've loved all three books and am eagerly awaiting "Haven". I did find the complexity of places, peoples and cultures a little hard till I relaxed - I told myself they'd sort themselves in my mind as I progressed and that indeed happened. P.S. I ran into a word limit last comment. Cheers, Geoff

8:51 PM  
Anonymous Geoff / Anke said...

Joel, here's the other "half" of my comment. I think "we" are probably very akin to those warring groups but we've had the weapons removed and conduct our warefare verbally or via our sporting champions. We operate behind a veil of respectability. Well done Joel - you're way up there with David Gammell in my book. Cheers, Geoff

8:56 PM  
Blogger Joel Shepherd said...

Emma -- thanks for reading, and for liking!

Geoff -- Only as high as Gemmell? Just kidding! Regarding the intricacies, people shouldn't worry so much, there's no test. It's supposed to feel like visiting another country, and seeing all this foreign stuff, and not understanding a lot of it immediately, but it doesn't matter because that's the thing with foreignness, you don't understand everything immediately, that's part of what makes it interesting.

9:01 PM  
Anonymous chrissy said...

When does 'Haven' come out in New Zealand... Iv been waiting since Oct last year and finally decided to look on the internet with no success... so hopefully, could someone help me out??
I think I probably have to reread them to remember what happened, buht i dont mind :):)

9:42 PM  

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